Thread: help on how to make a good introduction

my introduction was declined earlier..can you help me on how to make a good one so they will accept it..this is what he says,"there are a few things that need correcting on your intro: (For further info refer to this -..."

please help

btw english is my second language..

your intro was not declined there are a few minor corrections that are needed in your intro, if you read what silentninja is asking of you those corrections would be clear. We do understand that English might not be your primary Language, however it is also necessary to have some sort of understanding of the English Language to join our community as it is an English speaking forum.
You can find you intro here to make corrections http://www.torrent-invites.com/intro...uchikisho.html

Actually, many of them have been declined. Most of them were declined because you keep creating new ones. Just stick to the one you have open and do what silentninja asked of you.

http://www.torrent-invites.com/intro...uchikisho.html

You need to expand your answers and create a BT stats proof. Follow the link provided and you'll find step-by-step instructions (here). You don't even need to read it; just look at the images provided and do the exact same. No one asked you to create a tracker ratio proof so stop posting one. Read carefully and edit your intro accordingly. And again, stop creating multiple intros as it's a good way to get banned.

Your English is actually better than you think. I've seen far worse.