Thread: [CLOSED] TL Competition

Alright. Here's how this is going to work.

You are to make up the best childrens story book you can. Be creative. You can use images, text, anything that will spice up the story.

Here's the thing though. The story book must have something to do with... that's right, you guessed it. Llamas. xD

Okay, so I need some llama stories.



My favorite story gets the invite.

I will not give this away until I am satisfied and feel like a kid again.

Winner gets a TL invite.

That is all.

gogogogogogo! :D

The first Holliday

Once upon a time a very long time ago, there was a boy named Nimbus. He lived on top of a very tall mountain with his mommy and daddy and his best friend, Tutino his pet llama. His mommy and daddy loved him very much. One day he was playing in his back yard and a bird landed on the small plum tree growing at the edge of their yard. Nimbus had never seen a bird before and ask what the birds name was. The bird said her name was bebe and she was from the valley far below. Nimbus introduced his llama Tutino and himself to their new friend bebe.

They played all day and days after that and became very close friends. Now Nimbus had never been to the valley far below. He had never been off the top of the mountain. You see he was the first little boy in the world.

One day he asked bebe what it was like in the valley below and bebe told him is was a wonderful and beautiful place full of plants and animals. Nimbus decided he must travel down the mountain to see it for himself. So one morning he took his bandanna and placed a sandwich and a piece of cheese in it and tied it to a pole and swung it over his shoulder. He then climbed onto his pet llama Tutino and started down the mountain.

Bebe guided the way. They traveled over rocks, streams, holes, small tufts of grass, over steep rocky trails until they found themselves among the tall trees of the valley below.

By this time the sun was high over head and they all sat under a tree to have their lunch. Nimbus ate his sandwich, Tutino ate some grass on the side of the trail and bebe ate some bits of cheese that Nimbus broke of for her.

While they ate Nimbus noticed different creatures scurrying by with nuts and barries and pine cones and colored leafs and flowers in their mouths. He asked bebe what they were doing. Bebe told them to follow her. So Nimbus got on the back of his llama Tutino and they started off down the trail, all the time many creatures were running and flying by carrying different fruit and plants with them.

All of the sudden they came to an opening in the forest. A large meadow with a small fir tree in the middle. All the forest creatures were placing the nuts, berries, pine cones, flowers and fruit all in the tree. It was the most beautiful thing Nimbus had ever seen. All the colors glistening in the bright sunlight.

Nimbus ask bebe what they were doing. Bebe told him that once a year all the animals would decorate the tree to celebrate their home in the forest and the spirt that gave their home to them.

Nimbus and Tutino gazed in awe of the beautiful tree until the sun began to fall behind the trees. Nimbus said to bebe that the must start back up the mountain but he should come down next year and help decorate the tree. He climbed back on to Tutino and started up the mountain.

That night Nimbus dreamed of the beautiful tree and in the morning he told his mommy and daddy all about the things he had seen the day before. This was the first holiday tree in the world and after that day every year Nimbus and his mommy and daddy and his pet llama would decorate their tree in their yard and be thank full for the world and their families.

i got TL a few days ago frm a competition...
so i dnt wnt to participate...
but can i help u with this competition in sm way?

Originally Posted by kachraa

i got TL a few days ago frm a competition...
so i dnt wnt to participate...
but can i help u with this competition in sm way?

Nah, I've got this. Thanks though.



and nice first entry. =D

whats llama?

Enjoy:
"A new friend"

There was once a little boy who was lonely. The boy's name was jack, and his mother and father lived way up in the mountain area, in a average size community. Jack who was always a trouble maker, didn't really have any friends. Every time someone his own age came close, jack became every uncertain and then became very mean.

One day, while Jack and his dad where on the mountain trail. Jack's Father pointed up on a cliff, and said "Look jack, that's a Tapada llama". Jack has never seen a llama around his village and began to get alittle curious about them. Not a few moments latter the llama took off. Jack was a little disappointed, because he never seen one of these animals before. Latter on that day Jack went back to his house with this father. It was around nine o'clock at this time and was time for jack to go to bed.

That whole night jack was restless. He couldn't get this llama off his mind all day. Jack had no idea what time it was, but reliazed that he has been up for sometime. He latter got up from his bed and and sunk down the hall past his parents bedroom, down to the coat rake. Where jack began to put on his boots and coat to see if he couldn't find this llama his dad and him found.

Jack said to himself "I'll find this strange animal!". After sneaking out of his house and walked over 5 miles on the mountain trial. He gain to to think different. He didn't know if he was going to find the llama or not. After walking for two hours, he was becoming very tiered. Jack became very unstable, and told himself "Maybe I'll just rest here for a little bit". After jack began to wake up, he felt something wet on his face. Kinda rough but not like sandpaper. He opened his eye's and to his surprise there stood a llama! For a few seconds Jack couldn't understand why this llama didn't simply just run away like he did before. Jack was intreeged, and wounder if the llama wanted something maybe he was caring or maybe just looking for someone to be his friend. Jack began to search him self and couldn't find anything in his pockets.

When Jack stood up, the llama began to back up little by little. Jack held out his hand and started to inch little by little over to the llama. Shortly the llama, sniffed his hand, and began to lick this hand. Jack has never encountered this type of animal and was very nervous and thought to him self, maybe the llama is just as nervous as he was. Eventually Jack began to pet his long strong neck. The llama looked a little shocked, but then began to bump into jack with his hip. Jack had no idea what the llama wanted. Jack shouted loudly " I'll call you TODD!". Todd seemed to like it as he began to jump up on his two hine legs.

After a few hours witch seemed like minus. Jack told Todd that he had to go home, or else his mother was going to have a anger fit for sneaking out. Todd seem to understand and laid down and looked into Jack's eye's like he was telling Jack something "What is it Todd?". Todd released a moan, jack didn't know what to do. Jack asked "Do you want me to ride you?". Todd once more release moan like he understood. So Jack got on top of his back, and the llama stood up and began to walk toward his home, "Wow!" Jack said. "This is just simply amazing, I've only seen you once and you understand!".

When Jack got home and wondered if his parents where still asleep or not. The sun was just rising and Jack has barley gotten any sleep. "Sorry boy, this is where I have to leave you" said Jack. Todd seem to understand but didn't respawn nor did he move. Jack thought if he went to bed, Todd would be gone. So we went inside took off his boots and coat and sunk right back into bed. As he was lying there, he could see a shadow in his window, witch was on the side of his bed. Jack open to window and saw that Todd was just standing there. "Go away!" said Jack. But Todd just stood there. So Jack closed the window and went to bed.

Few hours of sleep Jack got up. "You sure where sleepy" said jacks mother. Jack looked everywhere around his window and wanted to know if Todd was still there or not. "yea, I didn't get much sleep" said Jack with wide eye's. "Well get ready, your dad is taking you for a walk on the mountain trails once more" said jack's mother. So Jack got ready, and began to once more get his coat and boots.

After walking with his dad on the trials. Jack was sad to see that he couldn't find Todd. After supper, Jack went straight to bed. Jack knew full and well that he wasn't going to sleep. He waited till his mother and father went to bed before he sunk out again. Jack began to look once more, only this time Todd was standing only a few feet from jacks house. Then Jack began to play with Todd.

In the end Jack found a new friend. Not in a fellow human, but in a animal. A animal named Todd who was a llama of all things. Jack and Todd continue to be friends to this day.

And they all lived happily ever after!


(I could use some work on endings!)

I'm laughin' my ass off! Nice one llama, lol.

Come on guys. This is for TL. A simple story with a llama in it. Shouldn't be too hard. =P

I got one.

Once upon a time, there was a llama, and he eventually took over the entire world.
-The End.